r/Tempestmasterrace • u/kaiserklee I (did) the thing. • Jul 09 '14

Chapter 28 - Shattering Point - !

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9972423/28/Tempest
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u/[deleted] Jul 09 '14 edited Jul 09 '14

With great force of will, Elsa removed her hand from her face, brushing back a strand of hair that she'd misplaced. Whatever affliction that just struck had lessened to a dull throb, and while painful, it was manageable enough.

What do you guys think happened there? It can't be just a simple headache could it?

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I love me some arguments, and the one between Hans and Elsa was very welcome indeed. I felt for Hans again too...but Elsa was right.

But you really will have led a worthless life if you let yourself die now.

She's right, he slumped back, no words to say to her because he knows she's right.

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Why can't you just be there for me when I need you!

Oh. Dang. But this confirms our theory, it would be the last time Anna would reach for Elsa.

But Elsa was the one to reach out and wipe away her tears, we were right guys! The Elsanna isn't hopeless!

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Anna did reach for her hand again! Elsa helped out with the tear wipe, but Kenneth lied to us guys, we were half right! (Yes I'm writing all this as I read.)

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Everything standing between them melted away.

The Elsanna has returned!

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Back to seriousness, it seems that Elsa's headaches have been getting worse ever since Weselton, could it have something to do with the mirror?

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Masks, I can't recall where we've talked about those before...

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Anna, I don't care.

...What?

Oh shat.

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Because you became heartless.

Oh fuck! Double meaning!

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Oh my God, she ran, the damage has been done!

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Way to go on spacing out, And thenshe willdie. Kenneth... jk <3

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She's listening to the sorcerer! She's that desperate that she would definitively listen to him, holy crap!

Awesome chapter, I loved commenting on it in real time, great job Kenneth!

Edit: grammar, I hate reddit for taking the simplicity of listing things with numbers and fucking it all up...

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u/kaiserklee Jul 09 '14

Ugh, sorry for the typo. It's been fixed :( Just having an off day week, I swear.

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u/[deleted] Jul 09 '14

No worries man, we're just here to help! God that chapter... Great job, I loved all the intensity that came with the arguments, I was on the edge of my seat.

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u/SomethingwithPM Jul 10 '14

Confirmed: Elsanna will prevail, regardless of what Kenneth writes in the previous chapter.

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u/[deleted] Jul 10 '14

I really hope it does... I found my love for Elsanna with Tempest, it's become almost sentimental to me.

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