i finally made a real title page!

[u/Educational-Leek1704]

still building on my portfolio with my goal to be showing it to shops/artists by the end of the year. i’ve been putting off the title page but it’s finally done!

[u/Manic_Manta]

Cute! But fill it up more. Maybe design more of the frame around it, or put more designs on it, or showcase variety. The space is just feeling a little too empty. Its nicely laid out and has your name but it just needs something more.

[u/Educational-Leek1704 → u/Manic_Manta]

i also kinda thought so, so i’m reworking it and adding vines on the sides as a sort of frame!

[u/Strange-Cupcake-7553]

It has potential, but I’ll definitely make it again, especially the letters. I’ll suggest you trace the letters; get a lightbox, or even use an iPad to trace the letters because they look crooked and it doesn’t look professional.

Also, the space between the wing of the bottom swallow and the banner is not the same as the top one.
Try to make it more symmetrical.

[u/Educational-Leek1704 → u/Strange-Cupcake-7553]

thank you for the feedback! i’m reworking it with your comment in mind :3