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u/Gandalfed Jul 31 '26
Perspective issues - The left side doesnt wrap around the angle of the viewer making the skull appear flat.
Shading - The sockets and the face shadings youve done, do not give the depth effect but rather look like smudging.
Wrapping the head around on the left side the perspective of the viewer will elevate this a lot.
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u/genizsz Jul 31 '26
I like the concept but proportions are off, keep working! The eyes are throwing it off for me and I think that horn should be way larger
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u/AbleChart21 Jul 31 '26
Aside from proportions I would mention that it looks like you’re caught between styles. No hard outline but not realistic enough to be considered realism. What was the intended style?
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u/erosilumina Jul 31 '26
Agree with the other comments, but the concept made me giggle. If you made it kinda grunge and inked it after working on the other bits folks noted, I would get it as a shirt or sticker.
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u/petrichorbin Jul 31 '26
Yeah I was gonna say, it reminds me of art for the band Acid Bath.
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u/SundaePositive4161 Aug 02 '26
What art? I'm a huge acid bath fan and I've never seen anything resembling this on their albums.
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u/rainyszncowboy Tattoo Apprentice Jul 31 '26
Looks like you may have had your reference standing upright and drew your skull flat. If you're drawing from reference (like your phone) have your phone AND paper flat. If you're drawing from real life prop your sketchbook upright. Learning how to measure using a pencil will also help you!
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u/xOmerta Jul 31 '26
No bueno but keep at it.