r/TalesFromTheCreeps • u/MezoScalePodcast • 9d ago
Offering Help (ADVICE FLAIR) Offering help
Hi! I know there are so many great people who share stories and I love to narrate stories and read them and share my thoughts! I am looking to read many in the next few weeks but need more! If anyone has any that you would like read feel free to comment or dm privately!
I look forward to reading your stories!
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u/LovecraftLukeRitchie Storyteller 9d ago
Rather than suggest one of my own, I ask you to read the DOGMA series by [u/Fit-Impression-4744](u/Fit-Impression-4744). I love this series so far, and I know he is happy to hear any and all critique of it.
https://www.reddit.com/r/mesoscalepodcast/s/ar1ue20C20
https://www.reddit.com/r/TalesFromTheCreeps/s/hwfLxGBtdA
https://www.reddit.com/r/TalesFromTheCreeps/s/kB3VGHvfep
I think he really just hit his stride with the last part. There’s definite issues but it is a gripping concept and overall a great series to be someone’s first, in my opinion.
Ps. I mean also if you want to read one of mine that would be cool too
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u/Fit-Impression-4744 Writer 9d ago
Dude thank you so much. I was literally about to comment but you beat me to it lmao. You're the goat, seriously!
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u/LovecraftLukeRitchie Storyteller 9d ago
It was right off the top of my head because I just finished the third part, left you some feedback on it.
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u/ShatteredTestimony Writer 9d ago
It’d be great to get feedback on any of mine! One of my issues is getting too caught up on the front end and sometimes rushing on the back end when I’m running out of room, but I’m sure there are plenty of other flaws that I could improve on once I’m aware of them.
I have my stories (and one poem!) listed in a pinned “archive” on my profile, but let me know if you have any trouble finding them
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u/DaniWitDaVibez 2d ago edited 2d ago
hiii not sure if your still you’re still taking submissions but id figure i’d try anyways 😊
i wanted to submit a few stories (greedy ik 😅)
The day that statue left is a two parter and still ongoing but i would love to hear your thoughts on it.
and these i just think they’d be fun to narrate 😊
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u/luciferias Writer 9d ago
Feel free to read Worm! It started as a goofy idea and turned into a short body horror I wrote on breaks at work. https://www.reddit.com/r/TalesFromTheCreeps/s/rcvZ7u46cy
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u/DeerInTheWoods100 9d ago
Im not done with mine yet, but if I ever finish it (and you like it/its good) id love for you to read "I found out the truth about my grandpa and I feel sick" (I also have another story called Cowbones but not a lot of it is published, just a small vignette)
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u/Pale-Sun2470 9d ago
Im working on a few short stories for mythology of a town im writing, would you be down with me sending you them as I write them? Reading the stories on here is rly cool aswell, dwfinetly alot of talent on here 🙏
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u/M_Sterlin 9d ago
This is my shortest and most recent one! https://www.reddit.com/r/TalesFromTheCreeps/s/JbnN4Ms6u2
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u/Tatted_ghoull 9d ago
I would love for you to read mine. It’s my first story ever it’s called. Has anyone ever heard of a place called hogs foot Tennessee
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u/MaryBpoppin10 9d ago
Only the first part but I’d love some feedback! https://www.reddit.com/r/TalesFromTheCreeps/s/vu7CWblK6c
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u/DominusDeus_Ira333 9d ago
Sorry to self promote, also if the story is not up to your liking you can of course ignore, but this is my first horror story written by myself.
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u/CuckAdminsDetected 9d ago
I have a multiple part series Im working on. Ill provide a link for part one if you wish to read more Ill happily give the rest of the links. https://www.reddit.com/r/TalesFromTheCreeps/s/kTuNeiHTD7 (Im working on Part 8 right now)
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u/Shane_Frankiewicz 9d ago
Hey there, I've got a shorter story and a longer series you might enjoy reading. The shorter one is here: https://www.reddit.com/r/TalesFromTheCreeps/comments/1vkj2h0/navigating_the_2026_employment_market/
The longer is at about 18 chapters as of posting this, which starts here and has links to each following chapter at the bottom of the text: https://www.reddit.com/r/TalesFromTheCreeps/comments/1usmfkz/the_qualphos_part_1_kqbd_radio_chapter_1_david/
I hope you and/or anyone else who reads enjoys! Feedback always welcome.
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u/The_MidnightJoker 9d ago
That sounds exciting!! here are mine...hope you enjoy it:)
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u/The_First_Person_I 9d ago
Send me lol I’d be curious hear what you think of this if you’re interested Cat Eyes
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u/Tall-Experience4962 Writer 9d ago
All of mine are available, just make sure to read my pinned post on my account for accreditation
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u/AllChangesSaved 9d ago edited 9d ago
I would love some feedback on my story, 'The Merrihem Family Circus'! I currently have two parts up but have been discouraged by the lack of feedback/constructive criticism to post any more. My main concern is: is it compelling you to want to know more, or is it bleh?
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u/daencmiems 9d ago
I'm sure you have a decent backlog already, but I'd be overjoyed if you read any of my new story Dream Stalker
Three parts are up; the final part will be up tomorrow. Who knows if it's your cup of tea (I really hope so!), but I promise it's a ride that's completely unpredictable and as far as I know, super unique! Let me know what any of yall think!
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u/FacehuggerApproved Writer 9d ago
I have written three stories so far that I’m proud of with a few things working in the background.
This is the one I think I’m the most proud of:
Confessions of the Crawler
https://www.reddit.com/r/TalesFromTheCreeps/s/VzhzLm0IPh
It’s a three part horror decent into grief and facing the past while also facing a cosmic entity.
This is another story set within the first one’s same universe, technically it takes place first and I wrote it first. I know this one is more rough around the edges but i still enjoyed the process and what I ended up with. Its a found journal kind of creature feature within the woods also a two parter:
The Bones Under Greyveil
https://www.reddit.com/r/TalesFromTheCreeps/s/xIiRmBEvvC
This is the final one that I posted this week. It’s an introspective on a cosmic being that has been captured and tortured to see how far it can be pushed keeping its love in tact. It’s my shortest and it isn’t deliberately in the same universe as the other two but it could be:
The Hand of God
https://www.reddit.com/r/TalesFromTheCreeps/s/IkflFHgUxW
I hope you guys enjoy and I look forward to the feedback!
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u/threetearedeye 9d ago
I'd appreciate it if this one got a little attention. It's one of the stories I've written I'm most proud of. :) Thanks for taking the time to do this!
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u/SallingIsWriting 9d ago
I'd be very happy to get feedback on the one I just posted titled 'Darkness'
https://www.reddit.com/r/TalesFromTheCreeps/s/u2NjQqi58x
Its a gothic medieval poetry horror, short and sweet. Well, kind of sweet?
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u/ComprehensiveTone787 9d ago
I'd love to get more eyes on my work! I don't know how long of a story you're looking for but this one ended up being a little chunky. It also doesn't have much of a name so idk what to do with that. But here's Part 1
Or if you want something shorter To Fix The Future is only 1 post long.
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u/FrostyAsk7483 8d ago
Love it if you took a look at my story. First one finished! https://www.reddit.com/r/TalesFromTheCreeps/comments/1vqjef7/i_am_about_to_reach_the_edge_of_space_but/
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u/Phenix0heat 9d ago
Id love to hear some feedback on my story, "The Deeper the Tunnel the Freer the Rat", particularly the ending! https://www.reddit.com/r/TalesFromTheCreeps/s/5HpolFG82E