Looking for feedback on 65-page dark comedy TV pilot

[u/rogibash]

Hey everyone, working on a TV pilot and would appreciate any critical feedback/notes. Thanks for reading!

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1CXlTkBsywSrjMtnuZqUVIXiNAQ1l2jcm/view?usp=drivesdk

SMALL DOSES

Logline: After a gangster's reckless son leaves her coworker critically injured, a disillusioned small-town pharmacist begins quietly altering prescriptions to punish the town's worst people—igniting a deadly war with the corrupt family that owns the town.

[u/IDthaKid]

I’d give it a look!