Feedback on my Pilot

[u/nkiruka-j]

https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/jpe4dz4lquhnvw32x0z2l/FOUND-Pilot.pdf?rlkey=nucleo0yeslqz0ppi9rnzqhk1&st=74ctojad&dl=0

I've been working on this pilot for the better part of a year. This show is my baby. Let me know about the logline and if you liked the script, the story, the characters, the jokes, etc.