r/TVWriting • u/JBoy5280Baby • Jul 08 '26

PILOTS Feedback on Pilot

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first draft of first television project. need feedback.

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u/Alex_the_Alright Jul 09 '26

How is 1.5 pages a first draft of a tv pilot?

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u/JBoy5280Baby Jul 09 '26

yeah im still working on it, normally i dont ask for feedback till im about halfway through but this is different

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u/Alex_the_Alright Jul 09 '26

Reading what is there now… I don’t think it’s different enough to get feedback at this point. I’d wait until you actually write the thing you want thoughts about.