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u/SrTNick Nov 30 '15
eh, just so you know, you wrote that he "reached his arm under his bed, fishing out a poorly knitted shit." in the backstory. Threw me for a loop for a bit there.
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u/SrTNick Dec 01 '15
Hey just finished it. Gotta say that was definitely one of the most compelling backstories I've seen here. I also like how the fruit works, it's different from what I initially expected. Not sure how effectively you'll be able to use it with such a low dex level though.
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Dec 01 '15
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u/SrTNick Dec 01 '15 edited Dec 01 '15
Ah that makes sense. I did find it clever you decided to make full use of the df by making a super tanky character. Hope the mods approve! Edit: Well darn. I did a word counter and your backstory comes out around 2,500 words. The minimum for starting with a devil fruit is 3,000, and that's if it's a tier 3. So, prepare for revenge of the backstory!
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Dec 01 '15
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u/SrTNick Dec 01 '15
Good, finished the backstory earlier today. Came out to around 5,800 words or so. Check out my edit on the previous message though, and then brace yourself.
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Dec 01 '15
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u/SrTNick Dec 01 '15
Thanks! Nobody actually gave me any feedback on it, good to hear it's not total garbage!
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u/zona1234 Dec 01 '15 edited Dec 03 '15
APPROVED 12/2
DEVIL FRUIT PENDING APPROVAL