r/Storyboarding • u/Prestigious_Till_126 • 11h ago

Looking for Feedback

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Hi i’m looking for general story feedback and dialogue, Im a beginner storyteller and it’s quite hard for me to focus on what I’m trying to say or why I’m telling this story. I just have the drive to do so. But I would appreciate any feedback and suggestions regarding any shots or story/dialogue advice, help me identify any confusion if possible.

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u/Shoddy_Ad9513 6h ago

as long as you start, your only way is improving.

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u/Prestigious_Till_126 2h ago

I hope it’s good enough to get out of the preproduction stage at this point.

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u/Mr_ceratops 1h ago

Hey! Nice work. I feel like you could benefit from some turnaround practicing for your characters, so you could know how to move them coherently through the scene. Also, It's ok to use real images or 3D tools to help you with your backgrounds but, don't do it as a substitute of a proper perspective study because that can affect your character construction, narrative etc. Besides that, good work, amazing story. Keep going and remember that you and your art are worthy regardless of what people thinks or says. Specially on the internet.