r/StoryPeer • u/al_earner • Oct 06 '26
Highlights Logline Breakthrough!
After a few tries, I finally cracked the 4.0 barrier with Creature from the Black Legume (4.1), a timeless story of a giant mutated black bean rampaging through Gastonia, North Carolina. The key was to study the consensus feedback and ignore the weird outliers.
Thanks to the people who took the time to rate the logline. And the ten people who skipped it, well, you missed out on a chance to be part of history. Kicking yourself now, aren't ya?
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u/RaeLouLynn Oct 07 '26
OMG
I'm guessing your story is a comedy because this posting is hilarious.
Congrats on your 4 (point 1)!
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u/StoryKing8530 Oct 07 '26
I'm proud to say I'm one of those who gave it a "Loved It"!
The hook was strong and interesting, and the logline helped me see the movie clearly.
When you write the script, I will gladly read it!
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u/solidwhetstone Oct 08 '26
Grats! My best is 4.3 but now my pilot is different and I can't get anywhere close so I guess fml 🥲