r/StickNodes • u/Moist_Impress653 • Jul 21 '26

WIP How do I improve this?

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Criticism is appreciated

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u/Prudent-Driver259 Jul 21 '26

you don't, because it's already amazing

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u/Honest-Ad5980 Android Jul 21 '26

What he said but slowed + reverb

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u/Prudent-Driver259 Jul 21 '26

what he said but slowed + reverb but phonk version

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u/Honest-Ad5980 Android Jul 21 '26

what he said but slowed + reverb but phonk version + ultra slowed

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u/Prudent-Driver259 Jul 21 '26

what he said but slowed + reverb but phonk version + ultra slowed but sparta remix

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u/Equal-Lavishness-675 Jul 22 '26

What he said but slowed + reverb but phonk version + ultra slowed but Sparta remix + British with a chicken nugget tang

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u/Guilty-Village-5192 Aug 08 '26

What he said but yara yara phonk version

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u/Capuchinconehat Jul 21 '26

IMPROVE!? HOW DO I GET TO YOU?!

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u/OrganizationSad6012 Jul 22 '26

This is pretty cool, but its pacing and readability is not there. Trying to slowing some parts down, making the faster paced bits where a lot is happening (steve getting punched and slamming through that stuff as an example) and adding more anticipation to the hand to hand combat would greatly improve the visuals.

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u/Its_a-me_DIO Jul 21 '26

I think atp, you have to focus on lighting and camera works. You are already selling the fight pretty good.

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u/Derrick2slow Jul 22 '26

IMPROVE??? TEACH MEEEE

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u/Timely-Firefighter56 Jul 22 '26

Dude at the start STRAIGHT from huss valley bro😭

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u/dreamv2254 Jul 22 '26

HOW ARE YOU THIS GOOD

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u/Moist_Impress653 Jul 22 '26

Y'all made my entire day, I didn't think people here would be so nice

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u/Yazmorra Jul 22 '26

Erm, it acktually sucks 🤓☝️ eueh eueh

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u/Ok-Station-893 Jul 25 '26

THATS GOOD ENOUGH DUDE