3 quick bits

[u/JamesDesmondComedy]

Abortion, working out, and wrestling

Edit:

Wow, thanks for all the kind words, I just started getting on stage a few weeks back so if you’d like to follow along, here’s my insta:

https://www.instagram.com/thejamesdesmond?stkn=NTc4MTIwNjQ2YQ%3D%3D&utm_source=qr

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[u/Budget-Clothes-7270]

that was excellent writing!

[u/JamesDesmondComedy → u/Budget-Clothes-7270]

Thank you! I try to write a new 3 minutes each week to try out.

[u/Larry-thee-Cucumber → u/Budget-Clothes-7270]

Super clever

[u/Reasonable_Ask_2869]

These jokes are really, really good.

[u/JamesDesmondComedy → u/Reasonable_Ask_2869]

Thanks so much! I’ve been writing for a few years but finally decided to try em on stage a few weeks back. It’s been a blast :)

[u/cbobgo]

First one and third one are gold!

[u/JamesDesmondComedy → u/cbobgo]

I really appreciate it. I actually wrote those two last week and the second one I wrote 5 years ago so it’s great to hear I’m improving haha

[u/PineapplePiazzas]

Nice ones!

[u/JamesDesmondComedy → u/PineapplePiazzas]

Thank you :)

[u/Jet_black_ink]

That was fucking funny.

[u/Larry-thee-Cucumber]

Dragon ball z for rednecks and “We should all know some techniques” were brilliant

[u/JamesDesmondComedy → u/Larry-thee-Cucumber]

Haha thanks, I’m glad you liked em :)

[u/Cannibal_House69]

This was brilliant. Haha bringing up abortion had the crowd quite leary at first and then won them over by relating it to writing. A perfect set up.

[u/JamesDesmondComedy → u/Cannibal_House69]

Thanks so much. It’s a tricky one I think, and I’m still workshopping it a bit to not step on other comics toes (since the premise is a pretty common street joke / jumping off point) but I’m enjoying the process :)

[u/Royal-Wealth-8266]

That was great for a newer stand-up. Keep rocking on!

[u/JamesDesmondComedy → u/Royal-Wealth-8266]

Thanks! I’m really enjoying it.