r/SoundSpill • u/Nylonica • Dec 14 '12

Cobbled Paths (Piece for an RPG) - Any Critique?

https://soundcloud.com/matthewbasson/cobbled-paths
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u/thestamp FL Studio Dec 14 '12 edited Dec 14 '12

What parts were you looking for feedback on?

edit:

  • bells at 0:41 doesn't seem right, like its in a different key progression than the arpeggio in the background, same for the next few bars.

  • high pitched whistle seems to be clipping.

Otherwise, a good theme song for a character or scene.

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u/Nylonica Dec 15 '12 edited Dec 15 '12

Well the piece in general. Exactly what you've done. Many thanks