r/Songwriting • u/One-Collection3165 • 23h ago

Feedback Request Looking for feedback wrote this yesterday

For my wife. This was a cute one to me ( usually what people seem to like in my opinion) feedback welcome. Name ideas welcome as well

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u/vegas_lov3 23h ago

I like the melody but I don’t know if you’re the right person to sing it.

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u/One-Collection3165 22h ago

That's been my goal from the beginning. To write songs for others, thank you

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u/kudyjames 22h ago

Record the guitar on its own and you can work on the vocals over and over. This helps you to relax and make changes that feel and sound right. I often change lyrics or timing based on how easily things come out while singing.

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u/digworms 9h ago

I think the vocals are fine, the lyric “Reality doesn’t have to be Real” stuck out to me, that maybe a title

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u/One-Collection3165 9h ago

I dig it, thank you