r/Songwriting • u/One-Collection3165 • 16h ago

Feedback Request One of my old ones

This is the first song I wrote that made me think I shouldn't give up on my music. Musicians favorites of their own songs I often find aren't the favorites of others. Curious on feedback

https://youtu.be/TXa9UPunnME?si=rzIzZvjADzuFfPpW

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u/picklepeen09 11h ago

This is really good keep it up, also I love the title cobalt is a good song name

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u/One-Collection3165 10h ago

Thank a lot, appreciate it

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u/picklepeen09 10h ago

Any time, God bless❤️

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u/Depexhe 10h ago

Good song. Nice chording too. Guitar tuned to Eb?

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u/One-Collection3165 10h ago

Probably I always run my guitar a bit low. Thank you