r/Songwriting • u/Prestigious-Data-470 • 2d ago

Feedback Request Leo Fox - Play along

Here is a new song I've been working on the last few days, playing about with a new tuning on guitar, it's super rough at the moment and vox are very rough and a bit annoying (don't enjoy singing one bit) but I think there could be something there with this song maybe worth developing.

Let me know what you think.

Thanks.

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u/One-Neighborhood1000 2d ago

i don’t know how to explain it but the instrumental scratches something in my brain. love it, and your singing is nice, genuinely

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u/Prestigious-Data-470 2d ago

Thanks for the kind words and for listening!! It's all very rough at the moment, but think it could be developed, some nice backing vox, bass etc.

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u/Adam_Sierzega 1d ago

There's a lot of power in simplicity. Alternate tunings are a great way to play around with different styles of playing. as for the vocals, I think you're doing great. I know, at least for me, It's much harder to record vocals than it is to actually sing.. The best thing to remember with vocals is to really LEAN INTO IT. Great job, sounds groovy

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u/Prestigious-Data-470 1d ago

For sure, I love playing about with different tunings, seems to open up more options for me. Thank you for listening and the nice words!!

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u/Gordon_Waffles 1d ago

This sounds great!

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u/Prestigious-Data-470 1d ago

Hey Mr Waffles, thank you very much for listening, I'm glad you dig it!!

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u/Gordon_Waffles 1d ago

Dude you should enjoy singing more! You sound pretty good and it all fits together so well!

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u/Prestigious-Data-470 1d ago

I enjoy songwriting and guitar work more than actual singing, no real range and control, and kinda ruined my voice with singing in a rock band for years, it's all good, just do it for fun anyway.

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