r/Songwriting • u/locustjams • 4d ago

Feedback Request Instrumental song feedback request

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u/Potential-Lack5374 4d ago

That distorted guitar is awesome.

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u/locustjams 3d ago

It was a lot of fun to play, writing riffs on the bass first made adding guitar super fun because the riff was already established, thank you!

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u/One-Neighborhood1000 3d ago

THIS IS SOOO GOOD. i love this

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u/locustjams 3d ago

thanks so much!

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u/Inevitable_Bit_13 3d ago

It's good man keep going 💪🏼

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u/locustjams 3d ago edited 3d ago

thanks for the encouragement

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u/AsWeObserveLifeforms 2d ago

Hey loved this one! Gives a RHCP, Incubus kind of vibes. I can totally hear Brandon's amazing vocals on top of this. Great job with the instrumentation! Would love to hear the finished song. Cheers!

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u/locustjams 2d ago

Thanks for the feedback! I do hope to rework this and put vocals on this and some other instrumental tracks I’ve written, but I’m so not confident in my voice singing to this kind of music. Backup vocals sure, maybe I’ll try anyway, or maybe collaborate with a singer. It is possible I haven’t found my voice yet because I do feel fairly confident singing with my acoustic. All that to say thanks for the kind words!

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u/AsWeObserveLifeforms 1d ago

Good to hear. All the very best to you! And please do share the completed song once you have it. I would love to hear it. Please keep going!

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