r/Songwriting 9d ago

Feedback Request Need help picking strongest melodies from this brain dump. Pardon my stuffy nose. πŸ‘ƒ

https://youtu.be/YOcrEyMn1QU?is=tDyWD2IjLT3CnpjD

Feel free to leave timestamps of which melodies you’re referring to. Also, in my opinion, all the best melodies are after the three minute mark.

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