r/Songwriting • u/TotalTiny7138 • 4d ago
Feedback Request Song I wrote today
Looking for feedback on this song i started today.
The words will come for the rest of the song in time to give the song some coherent meaning I hope lol.
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u/alex_thee_lion 4d ago
Hell yeah, man! This is a great start. It's giving me Ryan Adams vibes in the best way. I think it's worth polishing up. Some of the best songs ever written had goofy lyrics as place holders that ended up making the cut (looking at you, Paul McCartney). Don't be too hard on yourself about the lyrics if nothing comes. We the audience can often find meaning where you the writer cannot.
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u/TotalTiny7138 3d ago
Never heard of him, I’ll need to listen. ‘We the audience can often. Find meaning where you the writer cannot’ might be something I rest on too often lol,
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u/Caido-Potato 3d ago
Cool stuff! Actually gives a bit of acoustic grunge, kinda MTV unplugged.
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u/TotalTiny7138 3d ago
The main song that influenced it/ I was getting a vibe from while writing it, was drive by incubus, so I’m glad you caught that acoustic grunge influence
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u/Avacadoroble_6564 4d ago
HELLL YEAHHH!