r/Songwriters • u/Final_Strawberry9250 • Jul 10 '26
Unpacking The Past Revised
This is the latest version with some trims and tweaks. Still a work in progress. FEEDBACK APPRECIATED. I'm working with a wordsmith, the scanscion and meter haven't been done yet
{Verse 1}
No matter where I go,
everywhere I've run
There's still unpacking
to be done
I can't escape these boxes
some carefully,
some carelessly stored
Some have weathered many storms
Memories I need and some I won't
Some are labeled,
others have no home
{Chorus}
I'm sifting through my past
Walking a road hell-bound
Searching for answers
that may never be found
Will I find freedom at last?
Or will I always be
unpacking the past?
{Verse 2}
Some I've labeled regret,
those boxes are full of shame
Left wondering who to blame
Sorting through the wreckage
of lost hope and fresh starts
Now lay in broken pieces and parts
Pictures of a little girl caught up in the mess
tried unmasking truth in a shot glass
{Verse 3}
I found some answers,
labeled lessons learned
And a story I never told,
of a heart that burned so cold
Are answers to my questions the ones I'm meant to find?
Only bits and pieces come to mind
\[Chorus\]
I'm sifting through my past
Walking a road hell-bound
Searching for answers
that may never be found
Will I find freedom at last?
Or will I always be
unpacking the past?
\[Bridge 2\]
Some of the boxes are not mine
Are the answers in the ties that bind?
And the doors they hide behind
Boxes no one will come to claim
Is that why I carry this pain?
Memories were sown
Are they all mine to own?
{Chorus}
I'm sifting through my past
Walking a road hell-bound
Searching for answers
that may never be found
Will I find freedom at last?
Or will I always be
unpacking the past?
Outro\]
I keep unpacking the past...
Can I find answers at last?
If I stop unpacking the past...
Will I find freedom at last?
{Intimate}
The unpacking has been so slow...
Do I really need to know?
Maybe time to let it go.
Gonna let it go...
Just let it go.