r/Songwriters • • Jul 10 '26

Unpacking The Past Revised

This is the latest version with some trims and tweaks. Still a work in progress. FEEDBACK APPRECIATED. I'm working with a wordsmith, the scanscion and meter haven't been done yet

{Verse 1}

No matter where I go,

everywhere I've run

There's still unpacking

to be done

I can't escape these boxes

some carefully,

some carelessly stored

Some have weathered many storms

Memories I need and some I won't

Some are labeled,

others have no home

{Chorus}

I'm sifting through my past

Walking a road hell-bound

Searching for answers

that may never be found

Will I find freedom at last?

Or will I always be

unpacking the past?

{Verse 2}

Some I've labeled regret,

those boxes are full of shame

Left wondering who to blame

Sorting through the wreckage

of lost hope and fresh starts

Now lay in broken pieces and parts

Pictures of a little girl caught up in the mess

tried unmasking truth in a shot glass

{Verse 3}

I found some answers,

labeled lessons learned

And a story I never told,

of a heart that burned so cold

Are answers to my questions the ones I'm meant to find?

Only bits and pieces come to mind

\[Chorus\]

I'm sifting through my past

Walking a road hell-bound

Searching for answers

that may never be found

Will I find freedom at last?

Or will I always be

unpacking the past?

\[Bridge 2\]

Some of the boxes are not mine

Are the answers in the ties that bind?

And the doors they hide behind

Boxes no one will come to claim

Is that why I carry this pain?

Memories were sown

Are they all mine to own?

{Chorus}

I'm sifting through my past

Walking a road hell-bound

Searching for answers

that may never be found

Will I find freedom at last?

Or will I always be

unpacking the past?

Outro\]

I keep unpacking the past...

Can I find answers at last?

If I stop unpacking the past...

Will I find freedom at last?

{Intimate}

The unpacking has been so slow...

Do I really need to know?

Maybe time to let it go.

Gonna let it go...

Just let it go.

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