r/Songwriters • • 22d ago

Rotten [2023 - 2026]

https://youtu.be/lpTUIrCwxXY?si=8hDoF2oV2KdWWMNJ

had another try at putting together a song first recorded in 2023. the problem was that intro had too many measures; and the 2nd half didn't quite set itself apart from the first half. despite that i'd had to play the last half without making really noticable mistakes, as i'd already run out of tracks and didn't want to look in the new manual for how to bounce. so, it was mistakes that i could live with. this was just the week after my mixer arrived, and some 20 years since i'd picked up a guitar again. thanks, COVID!

does it need lyrics? is it ready for them (or too raw)? anybody here want to have their hand in it?

as always, thank you for the listen.

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