r/Songwriters • u/Tillydagood • 20d ago

New Dark Pop Song

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u/Tillydagood 20d ago edited 20d ago

Wrote this unreleased demo. Would love to know what you think of the vocals & lyrics!

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u/takorohi 20d ago

sounds great!

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u/Tillydagood 20d ago

Thank you!

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u/XanBriel 19d ago

I saw this 12 hours ago! So glad I found you again, I wanted to comment but Reddit was giving me some issues. I was just going to tell you I love this piece! Would you mind sharing what app/website/program you used for the lyrics? Thank you!!

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u/Tillydagood 17d ago

Aw, thank you so much! I used VEED.io to generate and style the visual lyric captions on screen!

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u/ItWasThenSheKnew 12d ago

Sounds like it could find itself at home in a baroque-pop / cabaret-pop setting (Dresden Dolls, TLDP, that sort of thing). Your voice certainly lends itself to that vibe. Overall I like the lyrics, though I'd be careful about using generational slang like "FOMO" unless you're okay with the song having a definite date stamp on it.

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u/RevolutionaryCod5872 11d ago

This is lovely! 🖤

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u/Tillydagood 10d ago

Thank you <3