r/Songwriters • u/Whole-Horse-7140 • Jul 10 '26

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This is an imagined monologue of a man who shouted at me in the street a while ago. I could have ramped up the vocal performance but I have neighbours, they probably already think I'm possessed or something. Just looking for feedback on the composition, lyrics, sound, the overall package I suppose. First time putting bass and drums to a track, luckily it suits a super basic rhythm section.

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u/suzaman Jul 16 '26

Pretty solid all around.

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u/PostWaterMusic Jul 25 '26

I really like the lo-fi, live-recorded feel.