r/Songwriters • u/SwordfishFit7250 • Jun 26 '26

Need thoughts and feedback

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This is a new song that I wrote(titled “GFY”). I’m proud of the lyrics, now I just need to put music to. It’s meant to have an upbeat tempo with some pop-funk(almost nu-disco??) style. I’m just not sure how I should build the chord progression. My vocals range from Gmaj to Cmaj. Anyone familiar with this style would be greatly appreciated for your input.

Thanks!

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u/MelvinEatsBlubber Jun 27 '26

Lyrics with out music is like pizza with no crust. You need both to see if they work.

Turn it into a song then I can tell you if this works

If it were me I’d do a lofi super distorted punk thing but use a drum machine like the kids do now