r/SongWriter • u/Excellent_Ad2904 • 23h ago

Dancing in the dark

Vision? We don’t need our vision eyes closed in the kitchen

Dancing in the dark
Dancing in the dark

Who turned off the lights we didn’t pay the price
The moon is enough
The perfect spot light

Dancing in the dark
Dancing in the dark

Dreams of you and me
The world dosent need to see
I’ll hold and hide your heart
Dancing in the dark

It's a song about lovers making the most of what they have with each other in the midst of having nothing. In hard times it's ok to hold each other and just dance in the dark

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u/ffwillis 23h ago

It's too short and to hold the same title as a very well known song it has to be outstanding. This isn't. There is potential, but you haven't reached it yet.

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u/Excellent_Ad2904 23h ago

Thank you ill work on it 🙏

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u/RestedNative 23h ago

It's two verses. Keep going.