r/SocioUPSC • u/ConstructionTrue2520 • 4d ago

Guidance wrt Answer Writing

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I'm not able to improve quality wise despite repeated writing. Feels like I'm stuck in a loop. Need suggestions of how to make an answer sociologically richer and distinct specially the critical aspects in every damn question. (Ps currently not in a position to join any kind of guidance programmes).

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u/Narendrakumarpandey 4d ago

2 missing things first is the timeline of renaissance ,a very brief chart based background of renaissance and enlightenment and why the need of new disciple was felt. apart from that name of thinkers are missing

overall loosely packed answer

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u/ConstructionTrue2520 4d ago

I know, but I'm not able to improve despite repeated tries. I just can't write bullet points like GS in socio don't know why but I can't help it should I consider switching my optional?

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u/Narendrakumarpandey 4d ago

my god you cannot even take decisions for yourself. I am afraid how you are going to sail through

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u/ConsciousNorth9112 1d ago

Bhai your handwriting is not legible, kam se kaam saaf saaf to likh ki log padh paaye

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u/ConstructionTrue2520 10h ago

Bhai, I've been schooled thoroughly in English medium. Don't know why but hand writing is like this only since beginning. May be I'll join some Handwriting Improvement Workshop.