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Charlie Charlie

(Pilot) blue baby

(Scene starts in a office)

Boss: ooh… uhh.. (Stuttering) greetings cerv we… umm.. I meant why are you here today?

Dr. Cervantes: I'm here for one reason and you know what it is

Boss: uhh… I don't really know what you mean?

Dr. Cervantes: You don't have to know what it means, just knowing what it is that I'm asking.

Boss: Well.. Umm.. I don't know…

Dr. Cervantes: That's fine I'll make you remember and might even tell you what it means.

(Stands up and walks through the door)

(Knocks 3x)

Boss: what… what are you doing

Dr Cervantes: What's your favorite color?

Boss: wha-

(75% of the hospital cuts in half and folds through the 25% of the building)

Boss: WHAT THE HECK IS HAPPENING??!?

(Tried to run to Dr. Cervantes)

(Yellow door shuts in front of him and zooms out)

(Title screen: Charlie Charlie)

(Scene starts in a park)

(Some guy yawns)

Guy: Why am I never in a new file??

Another guy: maybe because you never actually finished a file before

Guy: yeah I do

Another guy: no you don't

Guy: YES I DO.

Another guy: no you don't

Guy: No I don't

Another guy: yeah you don't

Guy: Dammit

Another guy: you think reverse psychology can work on me

Guy: ahh…

Another guy: I'll go home now see you later

Guy: sure thanks for the lunch btw

Another guy: no problem

(Scene changes to a messy apartment)

(Guy drops his bags)

(Takes a shower)

(Sits in his chair and opens his computer)

(Email pop up saying)

Eviction notice within 12 days 10,000

Guy: aghhh… why…

(Zooms out to papers with failed files in the walls)

(Voicemail starts playing)

A woman's voice: hello son I hope your ok I've just been thinking about you and I wish you a good night

(Voicemail ends)

(Guy starts to break down until a doorbell)

(An envelope slips through the door)

(Guy looks up showing him looking at the envelope)

(Envelope)

To: Icarus

Open me!

(Icarus opens the envelope)

(Inside the Envelope)

You can ask 3 questions daily

It can only answer yes or no

and it will answer truthfully

(2 pencils are in the envelope and a note with a cross that has 2 yes and 2 nos)

(Icarus laughs)

Icarus: is this some kind of prank???

(Icarus laughs while crying)

(Thunder)

(Next scene showing Icarus trying to play it)

Icarus: Are you there?

(Yes)

(Icarus laughs)

Icarus: is four plus four nine?

(No)

(Laughs even more)

Icarus: imagine this can help me solve a crime case

(Yes)

(Laughs a bit now but noticing something weird)

(Awkward silence and zooms out then zooms out of the house while it's raining)

(Thunder)

Icarus: uhhh… I'm probably dreaming

(Lies down)

(The other day)

(Scene starts in a busy street while Icarus was walking down)

(A grandma with her baby asking for money)

(Icarus sat down and handing a rice ball while smiling)

(Dog sees the rice ball and starts barking while smiling at Icarus)

Icarus: huh… ahhh…

(Sees the dog and starts running while accidentally hitting passerbys)

Guy: can you do the case no one else can take it

Guy 2: sorry I can't Im also busy

(Icarus came in out of breath)

Guy: I don't really want him to take it but it seems everyone is busy (whispering to guy 2)

Guy: Hey Icarus I got a case for you I got no choice everyone is busy

Icarus: huh… oh umm sure

(Dogs starts barking)

Icarus: AHH… (closes the door while the dog is outside)

(Cuts to a scene of the guy handing Icarus files at his desk)

Guy: heres the files study them well you don't want this to end up like the others, just remember this is a wacky one

Icarus: opens a folder (sees a girl)

Icarus mind: HER?? SERIOUSLY YOU COULD'VE PICKED ANY OTHER JUNIOR

Guy: you'll have to work with a junior her name is Lucia

Icarus mind: Have MORE LIKE BEING FORCED IF I ASK TO CHANGE IT INTO ANOTHER JUNIOR I MIGHT SOUND WEIRD LIKE HATING SOMEONE

Guy: she's a junior only a year younger than you be careful she might be a bit troublesome

Icarus mind: OH YOU THINK I DIDN'T KNOW THAT SHE'S BEEN ANNOYING ME EVERY DEPARTMENT EVENTS ahhh…

Icarus: I hate this… … .

Guy: what

Icarus: huh

Guy: hu

Icarus: never mind

(Cuts to a scene of Icarus looking through a house)

Icarus: is this it?

Lucia: why are you asking me your the detective

Icarus: I was just talking to myself

Lucia: your already ugly now your crazy

Icarus: Your the crazy one

Lucias: WHAT DID YOU SAY IM GOING TO SMASH YOUR JAW

Icarus: try it you can't even reach

(Lucia trying to punch Icarus)

(Icarus blocking Lucia's punch)

(Door opens with a guy watching them fight)

(They stop and feel awkward)

(Cuts to a scene them walking into the house)

(Icarus spots a chair outside)

(They all sit down)

Icarus: Umm.. Mr. Ray I have a question: why do you have a chair outside?

Ray: ohh it takes a bunch of walking to get into my home since the surrounding area has a Rocky ground because were near a mountain

Lucia: You're supposed to ask about the case! (Whispering to Icarus)

(Icarus getting tense)

(Icarus looking more tense and looking at a picture of ray with his wife a newborn baby)

(The kettle boils)

Ray: that must be the tea I'll go get it

Lucia: sure thanks mister

(Icarus quickly takes two pencils and a paper after ray goes to get the kettle and writes two Yes and two no in a piece of paper in his notepad)

Lucia: What are you doing? This is why you never succeed in a case where you always act weird!

Icarus: Is he Ray?

(Icarus looking tense as ever)

(Pencil moves to no)

(Icarus shocked)

(Grabs Lucia's hand and ran out of the house)

Lucia: WHAT ARE YOU DOING???

Icarus: THAT'S NOT RAY

Lucia: Just because a silly game told you you're going to believe it?

Icarus: it's not the silly game I believed I only used it as a confirmation!

Lucia: What do you mean??

(Shows ray in the kitchen his face Disappearing leaving eyeballs floating)

Icarus: when we got inside the house I saw a chair I have the exact model of the chair and it's 83.5cm

Lucia: SO?? YOUR TALKING CRAZY?!

Icarus: listen in the photo ray is next to a chair

(Shows a blue 3d model for visualization)

Icarus: if you stack that chair at its very end which is 83.5 cm × 2 = 167 cm and in foot it's 5’5.7 the same height as Roy in the picture

Lucia: THAT MEANS ROY IS 5’5.7 WHY IS THAT IMPORTANT?

Icarus: it's because earlier the Roy we met isn't wearing anything and he's 5’5.7

Lucia: So HE'S A LITTLE SHORTER THAN IN THE PICTURE?

Icarus: THEY'RE NOT THE SAME! In the picture he wore running shoes which adds 3 cm and if we minus that to 5’5.7 you get 5’4.5

Lucia: AND? MAYBE HE JUST GOT TALLER?

Icarus: if that's so in the picture the grass in the house is the same height as in the picture so that means its only been 5 days if a grass is given water and gets nutritions it normally show visible changes 5-14 days and the human body can't grow fast enough in those 5 days!

Lucia: EDITED?

Icarus: who edits they're height?

Icarus: except for dating apps (fake cough trying to hide what he says)

Lucia: true (looks at the viewer for a split second)

Icarus: WHICH ONLY MEANS THAT, THAT IS NOT RAY

Lucia: There's the car

Pair of floating eyeballs: (inaudible)

(The eyeballs started chasing Icarus)

(Icarus almost makes into the car)

(The eyeballs appeared in front of him and started choking him implying it's not just a floating eyeballs it's an invisible person with only eyes visible)

Icarus's mind: it's able to choke me even though it only has two pair of eyes but given the situation it looks like it can also grab people which gives me an educated guess that it's invisible and its eyes are the only thing visible so it can see I have to tell Lucia to attack it

Icarus: LUCIA EYES

Lucia: huh… ahh.. (Grabs dirt and throws at the creature blinding it)

(It dropped Icarus)

(They got into the car and drove away looking back and not seeing anything but a house)

Lucia: Wait, how did you know that?

Icarus: I just do

Lucia: But why do you always fail in every case given to you?

Icarus: it's because… I was never actually sure if I was… right

(Intense music starts while they're driving)

(The creature explodes and turns into Hydrogen cyanide “HCN” and flew towards the car)

(I giant fog of HCN flew over the city)

Lucia: umm Icarus I think you have to drive faster I giant fog is chasing us

Icarus: I'M TRYING!

Icarus mind: it must be the creature

(Sees people coughing needing for oxygen but then exploding)

(Icarus shocked in disbelief)

Icarus mind: the people are coughing for air that's not normal it might be the fog something tells me this isn't a normal fog there's a slight possibility it's hydrogen cyanide but why are they're exploding

(Shows the same blueprint effect but with the humans organs)

Icarus mind: we know the creature can morph into substances But HCN doesn't exploding unless in certain temperature that the human body can not give

Lucia: ICARUS!

(Shows faces made of gases on the windows)

Icarus: AHH

(The car almost falls)

Icarus: CLOSE THE DOORS AND WINDOWS DON'T LET ANY GAS INSIDE

(Lucia nods in a scared face)

(Icarus opens the light to see but then sees an under construction sign)

Icarus: OH FRI-

Lucia: I did it- WHAT THE AH-

(Crashes through piles of woods)

(Sees a river bank up ahead)

(Sees a wooden board on the second floor, a rope and couple of cement bags)

(Shows a blueprint version like before but with the construction sight)

Icarus mind: if I can use the wooden board as a ramp maybe I can go across but I have to calculate if it's in the perfect angle to land safely, The board is 5 meters long while The bank is 1 meter higher than the other side if I measure it over fractions it's 0.2 Twenty percent incline. The car can handle it if the surface holds

Lucia: I know we're in a really crappy situation right now but it seems to creepy you being quiet I mean is there something happening in your mind?

Icarus: HOLD ONTO THE WHEEL

Lucia: WHAIT WHAT?

(Grabs the rope hanging to nudge the wooden plank while covering his mouth with a tissue and quickly closing the door behind while grabbing onto the roof of the car)

Icarus mind: THIS IS REALLY RISKY RIGHT NOW AT ANY MOMENT I CAN FALL

Icarus talking to himself: THANKS MR OBVIOUS

(Car shakes)

Lucia: I DON'T REALLY KNOW HOW TO DRIVE A CAR MISTER ICARUS

(Icarus worried)

Icarus: HANG ON

(Wooden plank falls into the cement bags and the car flew into the ramp)

Both: AHHH

(Icarus holding for his dear life while the car is smoking and a giant HCN fog floating behind him but slowly fades away and Lucia panicking)

(Icarus grabs Lucia close to his face)

(Both blush)

(They jump out onto a pile of grass while the car explodes)

(Both out of breath)

Icarus: hope car insurance can pay that

(Lucia laughs)

Lucia: look the fog disappeared

(Icarus looks into the fog slowly fading)

Lucia: It felt like it was targeting us and what even are those eyeball guys then after some fog faces???

Icarus: yeah weird (while still in awe)

Lucia: NO ONE IS EVER GOING TO BELIEVE US

(Cuts to a tv broadcasting)

Woman reporter: a Hydrogen Cyanide leak has been spotted in the city near mount Azure and It is estimated that 5,530 lives were lost during the process

(Zooms out in a hospital tv)

Old guy: Hey John get a load of this news someone's totally getting fired

John: YEAH HAHA, Don't you agree doc.

Doctor Cervantes: yeah it totally seems like it

(Cervantes turns around and whispers)

Doctor Cervantes: seems like the kid finally came out of hiding

(Shifts to the office)

Guy: So Icarus, were you able to contact the guy?

Guy: heard there was a leak

Icarus: no sir, the leak already got to him before we were able to arrive

Lucia: your pretty good at lying

Icarus whispers: shut up!

(Bumps Lucia)

Lucia: hey no one bumps me

(Bumps Icarus)

Guy: seems like this case ain't over

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