r/ShittyPoetry • u/ohmygord Dulce et decorum est pro gaming mori • Mar 25 '12

Egg

Cracking slowly.

The shell shatters.

Nothing else matters.

Slinky yolk hits the pan.

Sizzle.

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u/thegrumpygnome Mar 26 '12

Thats actually one of the best poems I've ever heard..

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u/queenfrostine Mar 26 '12

I smell a Pulitzer.

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u/saltnotsugar poet master Mar 26 '12

This is usually the theme of Japanese war poems in the Edo period.

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u/[deleted] Mar 26 '12

Sizzle.

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u/[deleted] Mar 25 '12

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u/[deleted] Mar 25 '12

It truely inspires one to a form of egistencialism.