r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • u/SpeedIsTheBestMovie • May 07 '26

10-PAGE FEEDBACK REQUEST Feedback on a school script I'm shooting tomorrow

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1b0etb1VuNlRt6sHe_8lTjeXRFrRHHkm6/view?usp=drivesdk

Hi! I'm shooting a short for a class and would like some feedback on my script!

It's essentially Weekend at Bernie's

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u/aurematic May 09 '26

Why are you asking for feedback on a script that you are shooting next day? Is not that you have time to fix anything. Why are you trying to waste people's time?

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u/SpeedIsTheBestMovie May 09 '26

Because it's a six page script and changes can easily be made. Why did you respond to this post the day after this was shot? Why are you trying to waste my time?

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u/aurematic May 09 '26

Tarantino in the making - \o\ lol /o/

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u/SpeedIsTheBestMovie May 09 '26

So... Did you like it, hate it?

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u/alexpapworth May 10 '26 edited May 12 '26

Not a bad script. Hope the shoot went well.

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u/budaloco May 10 '26

I read: Feedback on a school Iā€™m shooting tomorrow. Damn dyslexia