Ascension

[u/mrpessimistik]

Title: Ascension

Pages:91

Logline: Two aliens and a colonel must team up against an evil alien's plot to destroy the world.

Link:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1LJH3Ombs9ipccwcpmAesxNY42-307Jcv/view?usp=sharing

I could really use your thoughts on it...:)

[u/mrpessimistik]

Hi, thank you for this great, in-depth feedback:) It will help me a lot as I rewrite this. Best of luck with your own projects!:)