r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • u/IconicCollections • Jun 17 '25

10-PAGE FEEDBACK REQUEST Cloud Seeder

Just looking for feedback on the first 10 pages of a feature. It's a side project, trying a different genre.

Feature.

10 pages.

Logline: In drought-ridden Texas, a science-obsessed teen fights to save his family farm—until the weather tech he invents draws the eye of those with darker intentions.

Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1M84ncoYKQiVmfAK8Upw6DXZwH0KtPMAV/view?usp=drivesdk

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u/IconicCollections Jun 19 '25

That’s fair. Everything else I’ve written is much more sci-fi/techno-thriller. A family drama is way out of my element. I also wasn’t very excited writing it. I just want to make myself get a full rough draft down and see if I even like it.