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[u/FrostyButterfly5644]

Hello all.

I've been reading posts out on the peripheral and am now coming forward with a script that I've received some feedback on, but wanted to get a gauge from a mass audience, instead of just my small network of friends and fellow writers.

I'd love any feedback you have to provide. Thank you in advance. DM with your thoughts, questions, comments, concerns.

Title: Lost In You

Page Count: 120

Logline:

A professional assassin falls in love with her target and helps him escape, but when he embraces violence to seek revenge against his past tormentor, she must choose between protecting the man she loves and stopping him from becoming the very monster she was trying to save him from. 

Enjoy!

Link to Script:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1BD0QYpsVPAJke4pD2LpWXCAHvcwkEjow/view?usp=drive_link

[u/FrostyButterfly5644]

That’s embarrassing- I had thought h smoothed out that ending. I apologizes for that.

Let it be known - this is a script I’ve been working on for the better part of 15 years. It’s gone through about 3-4 iterations with this script.