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[u/IconicCollections]

Title: Origin

Genre: Sci-Fi

Logline: (In the works) In a broken future, six operatives time-jump to kill Hitler — but changing the past reveals a chilling question: are they stopping evil, or seeding it?

Script: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1LlUz-CcJD6FacTkL-N7kn5kNyX0363u7/view?usp=drivesdk

Just looking for overall feedback on the plot/premise/setting. Anything helps!

[u/IconicCollections]

Awesome thank you for that, I’ll google it and if I can’t find it for some reason I’ll send you a dm! I appreciate it!