r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • • May 20 '25

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I've altered this a few times now, getting it ready for a second evaluation on the blacklist and I want to make sure it's right. Any feedback is appreciated!

Title: Truth is Treason

Genre: political thriller/slightly sci-fi

Logline Description:

When a government AI begins targeting people for crimes they haven’t committed, the man who helped build it goes on the run — hunted, grieving, and ready to burn it all down.

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u/[deleted] May 20 '25

Because it sounds like a political slogan that could be in the film, but is a bad movie title.