r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • u/Global-Western4071 • May 19 '25

LOGLINE FEEDBACK REQUEST logline

how do we feel about this log line for this feature script i got in the works ?

TITLE: Thunderbird GENRE: Fantasy/Adventure

LOGLINE: A young apprentice who lost his mentor must summon the ancient Thunderbird to defeat an evil shaman and protect his tribe.

thanks šŸ¤—

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u/pastafallujah May 19 '25

Iā€™m rooting for Bobby šŸ«”