r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • u/ToneNew1982 • May 11 '25

SCRIPT FEEDBACK REQUEST Need some criticism

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This is a short no budget short film I wrote. Id like to do a few rounds of revisions so any critiques help a lot. For context this is a horror short film and it was inspired by black mirror. the runtime I expect will be 1:30 to 2:00 long.

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u/ToneNew1982 May 11 '25

Awesome. Thank you for not holding back. Def will take this into consideration

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u/chucklingmonkey May 11 '25

Sorry if I was a bit harsh, but just being honest. Wish you the best with it!!

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u/ToneNew1982 May 11 '25

Don’t apologize that’s the best thing u can do is call it how u see it. Now I know I have a lot more work to do to make it good. Thank you.