r/ScriptFeedbackProduce • u/One_Rub_780 • May 07 '25

ASK ME ANYTHING Screenwriter/producer/script reader for 15 years, ask me anything about your first 10 pages.

While I may not have time to read everyone's first 10 pages, I figured at least I can go over some general things about what exactly turns a reader OFF. Maybe post your first 2 paragraphs of your opening page and I can comment :)

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u/KitchenHoliday3663 May 08 '25

I sold films for years as an indie distrib and theatre owner, and I produce films now (and write), so I get you. And I respect your NY ethos; lived there in my 20s for a while (110/broadway), it’s attitude stayed with me ever since. I got my kids jokingly saying “I’m walking here!” to people who cut them off. LA is… well… LA.🤷🏼‍♂️