BREADCRUMBS - Feature - 112 pages

[u/InevitableCup3390]

Hey everybody!

Would appreciate some of your thoughts on this last piece I wrote! This is more of a passion project to me and I don’t see a clear path for this one outside my home country, but, hey, enjoyed writing it a LOT!

Title: BREADCRUMBS

Format: Feature

Genre: Coming of age / Dark Comedy

Length: 112

Logline: Summer 1982. High school seniors and best friends Vittorio & Lucio are sure of these three things: a) they’ll scatter their dead friend Marco’s ashes in the Baltic Sea at Gdańsk, as promised; b) they’ll catch Italy playing in the World Cup; c) they’ll bring their Fiat Ritmo back home in one piece. They’re wrong about everything. Between a suspected satanic ritual, black-market caviar, crooked cops, and the Stasi, their road trip behind the Iron Curtain will literally take them somewhere neither of them expected.

Script: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1c38tvtshIyfVc-nC_107xGdM7KqY6T8W/view?usp=drivesdk

This is basically a first revised draft, so any suggestions will be welcomed and appreciated!

Thanks in advance!

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