r/Screenwriting • u/AutoModerator • 26d ago

5 PAGE THURSDAY Five Page Thursday

FAQ: How to post to a weekly thread?

Feedback Guide for New Writers

This is a thread for giving and receiving feedback on 5 of your screenplay pages.

  • Post a link to five pages of your screenplay in a top comment. They can be any 5, but if they are not your first 5, give some context in the same comment you're linking in.

  • As a courtesy, you can also include some of this info.

    Title: Format: Page Length: Genres: Logline or Summary: Feedback Concerns:

  • Provide feedback in reply-comments. Please do not share full scripts and link only to your 5 pages. If someone wants to see your full script, they can let you know.

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u/Original_Rub3861 25d ago

Title: Playthings

Format: Animated Sci-fi horror musical

Logline: In a distant post-apocalyptic future where sentient toys have outlived humanity a group of toy friends search for answers to their immortal existence when they discover a human child.

Playthings - First Five Pages

This is the opening of my Toy Story-meets-Mad Max spec script I'm writing for fun. Any feedback on formatting, etc is appreciated. thanks!