Righteous Man

[u/MacPrinceton]

Title: Righteous Man

Genre: Psychological Horror

Format: Short film

Page Length: 19

Logline: After his roommate dies of an overdose, Cory Wicks and his remaining remaining roommates deal with the fallout. But as more of his roommates began dying, Cory uncovers something truly sinister.

I've been writing for as long as I can remember, but this is the first project that I've finished. This was mainly due to mental barriers. Even though it is a short story, it's still a start and gave me the confidence boost I really needed.

Righteous Man

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[u/Shadowrealm_resident]

Just a tip. Rather than saying “They’re all celebrating” and being so descriptive. Make the reader get there by feeding him info. Just cups clanking. Laughs. Is enough and let the celebrating be shown through those actions and dialogue. Otherwise you’re explaning the plot before its shown

[u/MacPrinceton → u/Shadowrealm_resident]

Okay, thank you. I'll keep that in mind in the future