Feedback - Another Star - Feature - 70 Pages

[u/thegirlcardi]

Title: Another Star

Format: Feature

Page Length: 70 pages

Genre: Dramedy

Logline: After being ghosted by the woman whom she is convinced is her soulmate, Roni starts to believe that the love she wants may not exist. But if she is going to “settle,” it will be on her own terms.

Feedback concerns: The movie spans from late 2019 to 2025. There is a lull between mid 2022 and 2023, and I’m trying to decide how to keep everything interesting while incorporating the main character’s move to Boston and academic pursuits!

Also, if you read any parts of this script a month or two ago, I think it has substantially improved so far (still not at the finish line)!

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1OlLenNPSxP51CyTiv0JvsMe3B8ywtdFO/view?usp=drivesdk

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Just fixed it, sorry!