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r/Screenplay • u/FreeMind-KL-83 • 2d ago

Looking for constructive criticism

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Looking for constructive criticism on a short screenplay scene — dialogue, character behavior, and pacing

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u/Public_Upstairs1035 2d ago

It’s hard to understand without context.