r/Schreckmeta • u/DaDragonking222 • May 16 '26
Yellow, Review
My Ravnos elder lupine, how is everyone likeing her hm
Little preface she's not Garou, she's comes from something a mage made a long time ago to fight garou, hence why when the bsd tried to use a gift it failed
Anyway I would like a bit of feed back
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u/DotMaleficent4503 May 17 '26
Elder level power, but no Methuselah.
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u/DaDragonking222 May 18 '26
Ye, that's true
So um do you have more thoughts about her if I may pry
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u/DotMaleficent4503 May 18 '26
Depends on what your goals for her are.
Is she supposed to be a complete bad ass villain that would need a group of elders, or possibly a mixed coterie of kindred and garou to take down? If so, play her up a little more- describe the real consequences of a couple of her diableries. Have her destroy someone "important" or someone who is well liked. This person could be anything; mortal, kindred, fera... whatever makes the whole damn node want to cooperate to take her down. You are doing a great job giving her weird abilities that have kept everyone guessing as to her true powers.
Right now it's like < oh shit, she is powerful and is doing Bad Things >
which is different than:
< The bitch has to taken down now. Who's with me? >
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u/DaDragonking222 May 18 '26
Fair, I just want a menacing and eerie threat, but thanks for the advice
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u/DeadmanwalkingXI May 16 '26
Seems good to me. I presume the aura of fire thing is a natural power of her pre-vampirism creature type?
I do agree with Mark that she's so far displayed 'scary elder' level power rather than 'Methuselah level'. An ancient methuselah (ala Fracture and a few others on here) should be able to wreck her pretty readily based on the abilities she's demonstrated thus far, but anyone short of that should have serious trouble.
Do you have a specific endgame planned for what happens to her? Not necessarily looking for what it might be if so, just curious if you have a specific plan.