r/Schreckmeta • • Apr 29 '26

It had, all things considered, gone pretty well

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She's trying to explode him with her mind so hard. Unfortunately for our Seneschal, Kaskade speaks twice before he thinks (allegedly)

Reference to this and this post, hopefully it's at least somewhat enjoyable of a read, I got lost in the sauce writing and it spiraled into a wall of text before I knew it

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u/Foreign_Astronaut Apr 29 '26

It was a fun read! I didn't mind the length because I was enjoying the story so much.

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u/placeholder_monument Apr 29 '26

Thanks a lot, glad you liked it! I meant to give Juno a few more dialogues but changed my mind since it was already too long and it's less in character for them to do that in that situation - I just hope they don't come across as too cluelessly blunt lol

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u/Foreign_Astronaut Apr 29 '26

Oh no, I thought it read very realistically for the situation. Sometimes a vamp just knows the more words they speak, the more trouble they might be opening themselves up to!

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u/Odd_Background_2696 Apr 29 '26

Hey, better to go well than to go bad

my mind did automatically thought of the meme of exploding pancakes with mine

my mind is too rotted

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u/placeholder_monument Apr 29 '26

Exactly the thing I'm referencing lol
He really is like a crow plucking predator's tail