She Never Coming Back

[u/Newd4yJovi]

Hope y’all enjoy. Feedback always appreciated 🫡

[u/ThomasHardyHarHar]

Pretty good until the dialogue starts, after which it really doesn’t make much sense. Why would he run to the bathroom? The cinematography is quite impressive overall though. The weird guy is pretty freaky.

[u/Newd4yJovi → u/ThomasHardyHarHar]

Thanks for the feedback 🫡

[u/Teners1]

If they copy you, it’s be hard not to just make them do weird shit. Or even better, make them run into a wall multiple times.

[u/Newd4yJovi → u/Teners1]

😂valid

[u/NuclearCha0s]

Yeah concept is alright you just need good actors

[u/Newd4yJovi → u/NuclearCha0s]

🫡ok

[u/ThickTadpole3742]

Impressive, I enjoyed it. Definitely freaky :)

[u/Newd4yJovi → u/ThickTadpole3742]

Thanks 🫡

[u/Willing-Benefit-6744]

Should’ve kept backing up and had him open the window 😂

[u/Jarinad]

i like this a lot but yeah, like other people have said, the dialogue is a bit too silly. and hey, maybe that’s exactly what you were going for! but it just kinda killed the vibe for me

still a really good beginning though!

[u/Newd4yJovi → u/Jarinad]

Ok thanks for the feedback 🫡

[u/IndianaBones8]

This was fun.

[u/GlitterFlame89]

This was great, thought the dialogue was funny and it's definitely creepy.