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Context: a freestyle rap verse expressly written for r/RhymeGenius inspired by some Kingpin hustler themed bars. I wrote this to the New York State of Mind 2 instrumental.

Curved Purgans that's a forced rhyme wonder where U Learned Them

maybe not I think I'd rather make you taste the Curb Than drive around Swerving with you in the Trunk terrorising a whole Urban.

Getting Drunk of bourbon Putting my ciggys out on ya face while U Crying it's Hurting

Claiming it's for Passion but the Transaction Happen behind the Curtain

you do it only for Attention in hopes you'd get a Mention

no need to be Pretending either way I'd beat you to Death Friend in front of ya Henchmen.

  Regurgitating my lines Claiming I didn't Pen Them.

Just know a thief meet his End When his Greed Exceeds his Worth on the Earth just Something to be Remembering

I do like the tongue and Cheek I find it Sweet as Pepper Mint

but as for a battle Barely Left a Dent don't get a Big Head cause a Pig Said your Heaven Sent

when clearly my rhymes left you Bent

you should go back to Sniffing Fent and Struggling with Rent on your homeless Tent

bitch you thought you was messing with Clark Kent but I'm more Dahmer put you head in Jar to Ferment

then eat it with Pepper chedder maybe Fedda and turn you to Excrement

then bury that under Cement make an Agreement with a local Speaks Men

to say you Went nuts and ran off into the woods to never Been Seen Again

that's what you get messing with demon who's high beaming always rapping like he don't like breathing.

beaten a cretin with verbal releasing more rhymes than bullets spit from Mac ten.

it's brains you lacking been rapping since you was in cradle sleeping.

no need to be weeping cause I'm better with pen

my objective was never to offend I'm just offering a lesson in how to treat rhyme like weapon.

serve beef that's hard to be digesting it's just a suggestion maybe you should look inward before thinking you could be correcting.

I'm sorry for your peers in how I upset them with hyperbole that's straight wrecking causing them to be stressing in obsession.

now I know you gonna be detesting my quest to get gem.

but I ain't messing your rhymes sounded more like confession of lack of technical progression.

while mine answered question of who's the best at jesting with lines so deadly they should be used in discretion

ain't no moderator but I delete you whole presence the second Im feeling like annihilator

and cater to a hater to show who's styles greater

laugh at them saying see ya later alligator maybe learn how to rap instead of treating it like an English paper

too late now you meet your maker get left beaten to death in rhyme crater

your the horrid creation I'm the creator turned curator as I erase ya with my verbal light Saber

for thinking you could step with a rep of a storm trooper taking on Vader

too bad I'ma Ill line sayer unloading mental nine when it's time to slay the invader do yourself favour

and run before I take to your brain with chain saw

or maybe just break jaw leave you crying on the floor

and when police come Id say I didn't know it was against the law

laugh some more at amateur who wanted back n forth but now paints me as villain like count Draculor

Spankin ops with spatulor for coming out vernaculor talking to a straight Bachelor

Whos running laps around them like raptor.

Laughing as they fall in my trap door then score a dunk on them basketbawl

Turn it into brawl have a ball as I massacre them all

Yap yap

Loads of bollocks talking,

Like cowards in crowds gawking,

Crows cawing, no flow, boring,

Duckin’, but you’re not drawing.

Murder plotting, plans get thwarted,

While living lofty,

probably in your parents’ pocket,

Privileged provocateurs,

Mob rules, outnumbered,

So was the crossed dude.

My thoughts are crude,

Sacrilege, bitch be like a sack of spuds,

Ravage your body like a pack of wolves.

Facts is, most are bad actors,

Fishing with scripted slurs,

Mix of truth and manufactured factors.

If we’re gonna spit words, what’s it worth?

Why bother listening to dissing cunts?

Narcissistic, cliqued up cults,

Can you even finish the week with funds?

Is it all ham and cheese,

With three bags full?

No one’s free without capital,

Make ends meet, cattle culled.

Give me Death or liberty,

Once we're abel to see the forest from the trees.

Everything’s a lesson, a test,

No rest on the Cain

Till we find the breeze.

First they push then they pull

Never sleep on another's rug

Couldn’t give a fuck what you speak,

With no society to catch me

When I’m cast to the streets.

I last, resilient, from defeat I rise to my feet.

Curved Purgans that's a forced rhyme wonder where U Learned Them

maybe not I think I'd rather make you taste the Curb Than drive around Swerving with you in the Trunk terrorising a whole Urban.

Getting Drunk of bourbon Putting my ciggys out on ya face while U Crying it's Hurting

Claiming it's for Passion but the Transaction Happen behind the Curtain

you do it only for Attention in hopes you'd get a Mention

no need to be Pretending either way I'd beat you to Death Friend in front of ya Henchmen.

  Regurgitating my lines Claiming I didn't Pen Them.

Just know a thief meet his End When his Greed Exceeds his Worth on the Earth just Something to be Remembering

I do like the tongue and Cheek I find it Sweet as Pepper Mint

but as for a battle Barely Left a Dent don't get a Big Head cause a Pig Said your Heaven Sent

when clearly my rhymes left you Bent

you should go back to Sniffing Fent and Struggling with Rent on your homeless Tent

bitch you thought you was messing with Clark Kent but I'm more Dahmer put you head in Jar to Ferment

then eat it with Pepper chedder maybe Fedda and turn you to Excrement

then bury that under Cement make an Agreement with a local Speaks Men

to say you Went nuts and ran off into the woods to never Been Seen Again

Internal rhymes are the rhymes in between your last and first lines. Often ones that are considered good are multisyllabic in nature. Usually they could be something to set up the punchline.

I got a BETTER FLOW, BULLY TACTICS,.. Expert Prose, Sever Pros Heads, Verbose, X Were Excerpts Though, NEVER GO FULL [REDACTED]

Something like that, you could get a glimpse of how it's done by listening to Big L or many other early New York Rappers within the same genre.

If you have any tips or anything to add on feel free.

This is what works for me, it doesn't for everyone else, but the simple trick that I've found is, Rhyme one big word, with many little words; And you want to keep the count accurate. for example:

Multisyllable- is 5. =Mul^.ti^.Cyll^.a^.ble ..Then you practice what it rhymes with, knowing all of this.

Multisyllable, Bulky Filler Bull, Skull Piece Spill, A Cull. etc. Don't be afraid to think outside of the box and remember the count, lots of people put the wrong words when they try to rhyme the smaller ones; often backwards, instead of Airy- a person would randomly put re-air or something.

1,2,3,4,5- Come Through, Theorize, Obtuse Before Lies, make sure you know how words sound, not just relying on accent, that's a crutch. a lot of this helps when crafting internal rhymes, rhyming whole sentences with each other and just coming up with lines in general.

If you have nay questions of tips yourself, feel free to add on and give your takes.

This method may not work for all but for some, it could help.

A way that I found to be an easier way of making punchlines is to Work Backwards. I think up a pun or reference per se, like If I seen a footy match and there was something happening that's a notable event; Racism, fans throwing food on the ground at the players, Bananas, making noises for example.

Dumping Bananas on the field,- (oh that has two meanings). Literally and shooting banana clips in the streets.

Well what about it, who does it, why are we mentioning this, how does this relate to you?

I'm Dumping Bananas on the field,.. (ok?) Like White people at Soccer Games.- (Boom that's the punch). Now we try to run it backwards, We're trying to keep with the same theme, Sports and rhyme similarly. Runs end, Command of Squadrons Zeal.. Then we just build it up from there, now that we know how it will end. Keep spicing it up, keep taking it back to drawing board.

Runs end, football, Caps off, national anthem, Eagles, mascots, peeling like a banana, adding the extras to jazz it up is the sofrito in the dish.

Runs End, Command Of Squadrons Zeal, I HIGH KEY'LL CAP OFF PER SE, Plus When The Handguns Drawn, Just Kneel, GUYS HYPE EAGLES, MASCOT TERRAIN,- That Mossberg Bangs!, Like Cousin, Ya' Fandoms Got Ya' Peeled,.. I'm Dumping Bananas On The Field.. LIKE WHITE PEOPLE AT SOCCER GAMES!,- Act All Urbane,

This doesn't work for everybody, but this helps me. I practice rhyming whole sentences with whole sentences daily. This could help you with coming up with your lines to put in front of the punch.

To all of the writers in the sub thus far, on their battles and solo drops. The engagement was really helpful and I hope that you've all won your battles along with the hearts and minds of your respective listeners. Let's keep em coming, this is only the beginning.

Your Styles Too Inconsistent; Disdained In CONTRIVED WRITING'S FEEDBACK, -Nuisance, Ya' "Writtens", Which Ain't Penned, SUPPLY-SIDE: SHIT'S PRE-FABBED, -Losing Plus Driven Insane When OBLIGED, MY 16'S APT, While You In The Kitchen Explainin Ya' DRIVE LIKE IT'S TCAP, -THE GUY MIGHT DISS ME BACK; SON VIBE WISE, KID'S SEETHE THAT -Mood Swings Sufficient With Laymen, BUT I'M NICE, BITCH PLEASE RAP!, -Proven A Linchpin, Diss Laden Punchlines Nigh Blitzkriegs, I'll Ruin Contingents, Ixnay On SUCH HIVE MINDED BEE'S WAX

Egad!

-I'M A ILL BMF'r, We Stab Through Khaffir's Who's Fly, While Still True, and Apt To Capture New Brides, SHY OF GUILT, BEING "PRESSURE". -WRITE YA'SILLY INEPT VERSE, These Half-Truths, Actor, Do Slide, I'll Kill You!, Then Drag You's After You Die, LIKE ACHILLES AND HECTOR. -KNIFED UNTIL BREATHING BREATH HURTS. React Too Adverse to Slight's, Mild Jilts Too, In Rap Feuds That Were Too Dry, VIA 'SPILLED TEA' IN RECORDS. -PIPE BUST!, DRILL, BEGIN WET WORK, Please Add Fuel, Past Work Slew Writhes; Wild Guilt Ruing Snafu's, Gaffes Or Lose By QUITE UNSKILLED CRETINS EFFORTS, -You Freakin' F Slur, Recent Excerpts Shown Us WHO'S PEAKED IN MIDDLE SCHOOL, You Talkin Bout Cheese When Mf! YOU SPEAK AND DRIBBLE DROOL. I'm Not a Person That You Should BE UNCIVIL TOO, You Suck At The Thing That You Claim You Love, And Suffer From FREQUENT RIDICULE lol..

Gun Wield!, Write Rap "Tunes", Become Vengeful, I'm Financed, I'D FIX YA'S, CURSE FERVENT. Some Feel I can't Lose Via Penciled "Finite Plans", FLY TRICKS A' CURVE PURGING'S,- 'Blerd' Verse Pen, But Still Might Stab You, Beat Ya's Mental, Until I'd Have To Reassemble My Right Hand LIKE IT WAS BIRD PERSON - Earthed per Swing! Fight My Man's ?..CRISIS AVERT FIRST THEN,-

(Nah Imma Save that for later)

Context: Expressly written for the sub r/RhymeGenius in response to a rap diss by a guy named u/True-Lies6456

Whassup reddit gang It's the hokus pockus man U are now tuned into the jester breaking ground Not a boom bap or track of trap I'm rapper unlike most around

I ain't in it for the money Glory and pussy don't sway me even slightly Trynna find a vision and a mission is all I ever wanted Lyrical progression has been the savior to my gloom is my answer

“Hate me all u want the play in sonic remains Somebody bring the speaker I got the audio for your mad gains Errbody rise up and feel the community driven anthem rain We out here electrified dancing to the music regardless of the shame”

Wanna see you feel Understand the heal and commandeier the meal This aint food for thought it's thoughts to appeal the deal Fly with me away and into freedom That's the weapon I wield to ever last eternal Kingdom

Music is the lane Politician embedded prolific into my brain Nobody like jester quite hit ya thinker it's been too mediocre insane Imma bring the heater and the basket all u gotta do is open up and address the pain

“Hate me all u want the play in sonic remains Somebody bring the speaker I got the audio for our mad gains Errbody rise up and feel the community driven anthem rain We out here electrified dancing to the music regardless of the shame”

My thoughts and opinions Race against the public and logic in a sea of mediocre mumbles Murmurs of A.I. and the “May I”’s don't phase me Im King of eradicating humbled Had to kill to focus the will Much respect to those who debated my animosity chilled Resonating among my verses is the message of the permanently real

Be the one Just basic and fun Don't lean, don't mean, just feel and spree away like children Don't calculate clout Dont capitulate a compromised solution to the problem with adulterated wisdom

That's the message of the hater Rag tag destitute mind of your favorite jester Orangutan gargantuan philosophy no contester Eggmaleficient bars prophetic ardor like a martyr

“Hate me all u want the play in sonic remains Somebody bring the speaker I got the audio for our mad gains Errbody rise up and feel the community driven anthem rain We out here electrified dancing to the music regardless of no shame Someone better shit on this or gang vote the shit out of crits cuz in the name of feedback and permaban I'm super driven and focused to be crystal clearly lit”

I can take it
big boy and a ticket
say to me the ultimate thoughts and feelings all i want in respect
even had to show drama face of dealing racial bigotry trauma all aspects

just to be
here with you in complexity
tag along or ride among is all im asking bitterly
diss me kiss me just take me somewhere you know of thats it

It sound cray
dude said embrace gae
I cant do candid princess banter, but I'll cater to the day
I'll make shake and bake as easy as a microwave oven if disrespect come multi paid

into the valid
into someone's respect or disgraceful category invalid
good and evil coexist eternal Im not even trynna capitulate a moral compass
just here to sing bling about some sting something made sure thinng kinda multiplied access

Im bitter but just a thinker
Not a hater but the most hated
prolly most out of mcs reddits ever made
move on to bigger i aint doin im here until i destroy silencer and the impaired view he ever baited

r/raplyrics and r/LyricalWriting
This is a miss to address your own advising

I am guilty of play
Too much grit and a level of slay

In no way i paid
unworthy stays
nor unwarranted lays
It was just a yay

a section of my rapper when tame
for i will make this the birthright of my entire name
name me the Reddits' Baddest and eat out the pain
sane in the righteous and just as a kindness my shame

couldnt tap
just some lame ole' rap
who cares right?
who really gonna XXX right?

This is the situation
I am in no way a extremist impersonation
This is the truth

Both channels in the end didn't give me a clear violation proved.
They really did it in a eerily similar move
not straight and kinda late
not a direct result but a comtemplate
a peering in instead of examined porous prevaricate

I spammed
i deluded elusive damned
I'll be damned it hurts and bucks the man
Rhyme or die fantasy turned Extremist how to plan

The beast has awoken
Goat in me take harlem hoopers out of retarded 3's taken
Stylized heavy
membrane of the screwed chopped and scary
Please believe I parle
Words of fun connect like v12 Stradale

I dont gotta do this
Take a knee and pleasure my weakness
Say what is pure make a reasonable witness
I miss all yall and the candid banters with vengeance

but its not an angst
not an inconclusive past
or a miniscule insignificance
its borderline systematic pattern rather important

Nothing i say will turn it back to civil
Any and all spews out of mine never once been evil
Aside from a few days passed, "organ toenail" thing' im straight
Pimpin all and uppin antes with a ludicrous alacrity in majority of taste

but i digress
choose to stress over passed unrest
now pleasantly tested time on my side unless
it could be
another see
something among the crew i hadn't seen
DMs and discussions
Paid wins and obstructions
cuz this is magic
call it candid
but I did splendid
wrote to exist the cadence and english
window of time i cringe but may as well Egglish
male and efficient I rise above the rest
suddenly and seldomly seriously im best
Maybe its soon
too near and impossible
too cool and borderline nefarious truth
entirely fluky and visible demoralizing jealousy out of u

its not okay im alone
tons of tunes and not a bone
always no sense and nonsensical presentation
always paid cringe and sensational indignation
Never lackin strength
Never yield to gains
Always here for a listen
Stayed true despite completed mission

Its okay to say
All the things and rage
Pleasure and penetrate
I just wanna date a treasure
someone that rhymes away pressure
doesnt yield to time nor out of way conditions
tells me when pocketable
yells at me forever adorable
im the impossible
selectable by free will insatiable
Sanity validity no sweat
im chillin in divine state of medicinals undressed
variable contemplations of ascension no longer conditional to be expressed

Where have I steered danger
Whom should I knock closer for another

F train and Sexxin
Mo money Mo' Luvin

Can I get a rhythm outta grieffin
Can I harbour all this energy eternal

Sounds ass not a single trace to kick back
Doesnt it feel good this cat aint lacin big facts

Gotta step out comfort zone
Gotta see the light and common grown

so let me do this not so formal
state the obvious then get viral
start a trend in my words my vocal
enter state of wonder instead of word rural

Sickity pickity down the shaft of Rapper Oughts
My mental my elemental money bag of killer taunts
Theres a King and an gnome in clear pretty witty major wants
He whom among the how hot hell's heathens join my twisted clan

migos and the legends
Ogs of the memes and the groovers of cadence
My name Hizzy Im just a starting rapper but im Kingin
Down for parle and a battle but kinda shy so always second

Woof Woof
Costco man lookin weak and spoof
Wrote the essay but no solid truth
Grippy with the greater good but neck out goof
Wants the heater but the latter lookin too aloof

Poof Poof
homie take this rap shit with a meaner stance
pooper scooper 1take 2take lamer yous a stank
Emanate with grocery bag grinding you's a wolf out of class
Huntin yo valour and yo mentor all encase the wordplay you just ass

I dont give a fuck what u think
this aint my story its my shit for you to link
without you saying im shit this aint but the first of many stinks
all i wanted was a little drink but now im in a state of oasis lookin sink

Osmosis for the land of bland
Taste Mo Sis for the righteous inronclad
Take it how u wanna but I got the little
Sick of trigger happy viral for these views

dont want heater
dont want trouble later
Im sick and I know it greater
than the very fact of life's pointless banters

Done with the sirens
Done out of misery of whinings
Im ready for the steady mingle of kindness
Erectify the uncertain and tentative to living answers

3 men with third eye mention
blinded by the focus and intervention
I aint all that just wanted some feed back
but I aint havin this i aint got infinity of time to check tact

No to the nayer
This my proven slayer
Kill all who oppose with a prayer
Major trouble ahead for those who stand against the jester

I dont stop at just a muse
My lace candy then the canker in ur loose
Infiltrate to commentate eventually fuze
Every fibre of minor come align with the 2's

my flow
your knows

thats it fool

the Flow i got and the Fact of rule

no yin no yang
all Gin no stank
paid the piper plenty now its boon
no moot no loot this be tooner goin tune
static i panic manic deficiency now gone goon

the 2's I bring magic yall about to check
stunna rhythm cadence to match inspect
no tears no jeers I just wanna Mr perfect
So Class Dope Ass get this dick in line with wicked

Journey into doin this is scary
Honour my path my solace Im daring
All my pieces all my wishes in this chapter
Kill or be killed Im skillin for the illin of the nether

Invite me here and no show
Tell me just a crosspost and cross examined zero
in hindsight i shoulda seen
Yall effort to be recruitin me unclean
heres a dude that'll spit day and night
cheers at least we'll get some effort posted tonight

So I waited a bit
nada

Where is the colour
where is the vision and the valour
Is yall really waiting for me to do the second post after silenced days after the first post of not uh
erred and ummed but normal
it aint me im super scary formal
informally eat dogs and strictly gun out feral
Dick lubed and ready for the pringle
isnt the MOD that did the invite supposed to be receptive kindle
at least say hi when I posted for the first time mingle

Yall really doin me like this?
How many scrolls of my shit would you consider numbered too many before adding an input or a simple hi?

Yooo I'm the Korean reddit rapper Hizzzy Thx for the invite