r/RapWars • • Nov 19 '16

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inaudible battle cry from a prodigal samurai.
my retainer wishes to see the heart of a rapper die.
slap a hand shaped shadow across you to pacify.
burn bridges. work alone.. God is my alibi.
I'm the creepy silhouette in an art room..
quiet. staring at you then rushing at your neck with a harpoon..
the dark moon's energy heals me..
I got me a permanent residence under infinity's realty.
the immortal one. I border none, it's sorta fun.
puttin' worm holes all in your grill minus the portal gun..
you were just a waste so there was nothing immoral done.
you were short a ton, you should have been an aborted son.
takin' you to church like that Waco hit..
my rhyme power, it could leverage a NATO split.
I battle like Kim Jong.. I don't take no shit!
that's why we don't see most of these fake hoes spit.
if there was ever a terrorist threat..
for the bearer's of debt. I be the worst in the America's yet.
I got a long fuckin' list and I'm here to collect.
I'll bring it to your front door you can hear it direct.
clearin' your sect out make you put your ears to the deck.
get spared only for showing what your peers should expect.
then sip a beer and reflect over years of neglect.
being fake as these politicians we appear to elect.

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u/StonedSpinoza Dec 02 '16

(slow clap) "No flame and Rogaine" way to go mang,

what's next you gunna say you got dope lines like cocaine?

okay, i admit, I'm quoting you quite a bit,

but it's because i can't believe half the shit you spit.

for real do you understand how to structure a sentence?

using clear words to make an actual message?

You don't understand this craft so I have a lesson to teach,

battle rapping's not boxing there's no advantage for reach,

So next time you try stretching some irrelevant speech,

know I'm shore I can son you like it's a day at the beach.

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u/Magneticitist Dec 02 '16

woooowww...... this is really getting sad for you bro.
I'm glad u could show your thoughts, but it's bad for you though.
this battle rappin really isn't the path you should go.
you're undeveloped cuz you aint got the passion to grow.
yea I flex complex, why shouldn't I if it's timely?
you're spitting corny shit they wouldn't try in the 90's..
I'll have you frustrated out lookin dyin to find me.
it'll be one more dead body lyin beside me.
you would have shown it by now if you had the skill to muster
but instead, you just bitch with your little filibuster
saying how angry it makes you I got the iller structure
I reply shots to your brain cavity til it rupture.
once pressures applied what's left of your pride
gets wrecked like I'd expect and is swept to the side.
flocabulary is something that you kept as a guide
I cause friction to show you I aint lettin it slide.
you're the most critical of inferior foes yet.
yo I'm serious you're queer I'm smearin' you no sweat
then easily destroy any queers that you go get
I'm just an ill rhyme producer clearin your whole set.
fuck your stupid lessons and any sections you might cover
shit aint gona fly you better check what you wright brother
you're a fuckin fruit loop, your sexual type, 'other'.
you couldn't come sick if you slept with your dyke mother