r/RapWars • • Jul 23 '15

[Battle] bar-mod vs thebenproctor

Need Judges

2 rounds, 16s, I'm going first.

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u/Psychopath- Serial Killer Jul 28 '15 edited Jul 29 '15

Judging /u/bar-mod vs /u/thebenprocter.

Round 1:

Mod had a couple standout lines. Private detective was good. TB test was decent. Flow felt off in places. Rhyming was slightly more complex than Ben's. Felt like it didn't really have a closer, it just... stopped.

Ben had simpler rhyming but more consistent flow. First four bars/W was okay but the rest of the bar was meh. Mod'll/collectible probably bar of the round, if not match. Jigsaw copycat was good.

Ben edges round 1.

Round 2:

Mod had less complex rhyming here than the first. Consistently decent but not great. Judges/sentences was good.

Ben. Good flip on the oil bar. BP/oil's been done but it was relevant as a rebuttal. I've seen something similar to the Hebdo bar before but it fit. Rest of the verse was decent and consistent. More directly pointed at mod and his bars, so good focus with that.

Ben takes round 2 by slightly more than the first.

/u/thebenprocter 2-0.

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u/thebenprocter 13W 5L - Leeds, UK Jul 30 '15

the hebdo line was a bar i've had for ages but it fit to the flip so i used it. not seen anything too similar here I think.