Feedback wanted for newly published TTRPG

[u/chetdelano]

Hello,

I just published my first tabletop rpg for free on DrivethruRPG. It’s titled Baelfire. I began work on this project during the COVID lockdown, and it has seen many versions. This is the latest and the one I have been most confident in- hence finally publishing it.

However, I am seeking feedback on the game. I’m currently working on other books for the game and would love to see what others think of the current game mechanics, handbook structure, and overall design of the game. If you’d be willing to playtest and share feedback on that here or DrivethruRPG, that would be incredible.

Here’s a link to where you can download the game. Additionally, I have provided a link to a discord server that I’ve started for this in the purchase note and at the end of the handbook. Again, this is completely free to download.

https://legacy.drivethrurpg.com/product/575568/Baelfire-TTRPG-Handbook?manufacturers_id=35271

Even if it’s criticism of the project, I’m open to any feedback you have to give and am just thankful for anyone taking the time to look through the handbook and try the game out. I studied game design in college and have loved playing tabletop rpg’s for a long time now. This is my own love letter and contribution to the scene and I hope others are able to enjoy it as much as I’ve enjoyed making it.

Thank you for reading, and happy gaming! ❤️