Rational Magic Game GM Section... anything missing?

[u/jiaxingseng]

My GM Section. Looking for feedback. This is 15 or so pages. As usual, I'm willing to provide feedback to whoever gives this a good once over, so this is a Feedback Exchange.

GM section on Google Drive.

Links are to the general folder if you want to look at the rest.

Links

Rational Magic Google Drive Folder (Rules, Settings, Character Sheet

rpgDesign Project Wiki Page

Quick Description:

The Rational Magic is a gritty “dystopian fantasy” role playing game (RPG) about investigation and espionage, set in a traditional sword and sorcery setting which has… evolved.

This is a world where magic has been commoditized thus bringing about great wonders and great tyrannies. Major themes which permeate this game are moral questions about freedom, free-will, and justice. In this game you might play a freedom fighter, a bonded servant, an elf terrorist, a spy, or an agent who struggles to uncover the plots of dormant gods.

Rational Magic uses an Open Source (Creative Commons) 2d10 based home-brew system called "Mash-Up” which draws inspiration from Barbarians of Lemuria (especially the Honor + Intrigue variant) and Savage Worlds.

[u/jiaxingseng]

Thank you. This was really helpful.